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Wednesday, 3 June 2020

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WALT:




There is a girl and  and she dose not know any thing about japan so she asked her grandmother
and  her grandmother told her about japan.
her teacher is asking her question but she dose not no the answers and kids are bulling her.










   

8 comments:

  1. Hello Riley! Nice job on your story board, i think it looks great! But there appears to be something wrong with it. First 1 is that there's only 4 W's not 5. And there's a blank page on the last one. Other then that it looks great!

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  2. hi riley like your post about something alive. do you know that the big spase in your work?

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  3. Add more writing.

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  4. And check your spelling.

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  5. Hi Riley. I found this confusing to read, could you maybe add on to what you have mentioned?

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  6. Hello Riley i really like your summery on something alive but i hope next you add some more writing. =)

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  7. hi riley i like your post but i think you should add more writing and check your spelling

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  8. Hi Riley! you seem to have left a blank box in your story board. Do you think you could edit that bit out?

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