WALT Writing to describe our nga atua maori like us.
this Term in huia whanau have been talking about maori gods the first thing we did is a bus stop activity. And then we read the creation story and retold it in our own creation way. I chose to work collaboratively with Jaspa and Marko we made a animation. What maori god do you relate to?
Tēnā koe Riley. I can see you have put a lot of effort into your blog post, well done. I'd be interested to know what working collaboratively with Jaspa and Marko was like? How did you find working with your classmates?
ReplyDeleteI relate to multiple atua in different moments, but I feel I connect most with Papatuanuku and Tangaroa because I'm drawn to both nature and water. Who are your favourite atua and why do you like them the most?
tips
ReplyDelete1. capital letter after a full stop
2. you never start with a and after a full stop
3.explain more about the bus stop
Also can you make a post that is the animation story.
What Maori god do i relate to Maui
Ok Henry thanks for the feedback. What did you do on your maori gods.
ReplyDeleteHello Riley, Jaspa here. I like that you've worked on that but next time maybe, you can add a drawing of your Maori god? also add full stops and capital letters next time.
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